- The text contrasts fake "wax flowers" with real Mount "Parnassus" of Greece in lines 5-6.
- There is another contrast following Parnassus as the text begins a long detail of a bee's nest in line 7. This shift is emphasized further by the "..." which follows Parnassus.
- The word "just" is repeated in line 1, discussing deserved "pride."
- The words "matches," "boil," and "fire" in line 2-3 are used in reference to the speaker's "blood" and "tricks" in terms of writing.
- Line 8 focuses on circular, repetitious patterns in regards to the honeybee's work.
- The speaker claims he is "finished with wax flowers," but later refers to "wax and honey of a mausoleum." Therefore, there is a contradiction.
- The final line repeats "open" in reference to a "book" and a "coffin" along with a "..." to split the terms. This reflects the relationship between the bee's hive which "proves its maker is alive" and houses its "corpse."
- "Lives embalmed" is an oxymoronic phrase that parallels life and death.
- There is a contrast between "sweet-tooth bear" and the word "desecrate."
- The poem moves from a first-person point of view, to a third-person point of view (describing the bees), back to first person in reference to the speaker's coffin. This reflects the circular language in line 8.
Sunday, September 12, 2010
Inventory for Robert Lowell's "Reading Myself," p. 19 week 4
-From Contemporary American Poetry:
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